1. Radio Dramas Study
2. Mood-board SciFi Idea
3. Ideas for a Radio Drama 3-5
- A woman goes to a doctor to take a pill for her illness but the doctor swaps the drugs with another person's. The pill ends up being a powerful synthetic drug that people from China have been working on for years to help them change how the humans mind work and develop their physical body strength. When the woman gets home she realises there is something wrong as her mind unlocks her full potential. She can see how computers work, see though buildings.
- Robots are taking over the world and they are being sent to space to discover life on a different planet (Mars or Venus)
- Humans are fighting to stay on Earth but Robots are slowly developing newer technology. They begin to take over the world and the human population decreases.
- Technology has developed rapidly and humans are trying to get rid of every robot on Earth but they are finding it very hard. Robots are fighting for rights to live just like humans.
4. Discussion in group ideas
5. Draft of group idea - The Secret
6. Draft of own idea - AI vs Humans
7. Treatment - The Secret DRAFT 1
7. My own Treatment - AI vs Humans
Radio Drama Advert
P4)
Pitch - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AqRb0pufh08
Pitching Feedback (Groups)
My Idea Pitch
When my idea was being pitched, the people from the other groups thought that my story was different. They liked it because it was unique by having all the robots who are AI and how the human roles have changed. The feedback from my script was that it was a bit confusing to start with but later on the story came together, so I changed my some of the dialogue at the start so the story is better.
Pitching
My feedback was that i need to get confident with presenting ideas and be clear with that I am talking about. The pitch was detailed and had all the key points needed for the story to be understood. The thing I need to work on most is shortening my information and not dragging it out as much. I thought the pitch went well i just need to practice with presenting ideas.
Pitching Feedback Treatment (class)
Explain in a bit more detail why the humans want to go against the robots. We also got feedback on where the story could go e.g. maybe he finds out the secret and decides it’s too dangerous for anyone to know, or it trust out there is no secret. We also got a suggestion to add an extra robot so there are two robots and two humans. Explain in detail what the characters are like, what jobs they have and what age they are and what they do. Also add detail to the story so the treatment is not as short and it gives more information about the plot. The treatment should also include more visuals so audience is engaged and understands the story better.
feedback 1
feedback 2
feedback 3
As a group we decided to pick 'The Secret' because the idea would be easy to do and it won't take a long time to do. By looking at the feedback the pitch was very convincing so that was the reason to why we chose the Secret.
P5)
Group Treatment Updated - DRAFT 2
Draft 2 (updated)
THE SECRET RADIO SCRIPT FORMAT
Script changes
The changes we made to script were that we added an extra character to the story. Lexie is the new female character and we decided to add her because we wanted to make to story more interesting by making her a bad who is trying to set up Crowby example: "Hurry up, get the information out of him."
Production Plan
No comments:
Post a Comment